Evaluation of pitch

I thought the pitch went smoothly and efficiently. We expressed our general ideas in an organised way through the Prezi presentation and set out a clear representation of our intentions and ambitions with this task. We offered thorough detail in possibly all slides, although we could've developed our character representations. For example, with the main character being Apex Arachnid (Alexis), we could've explained more as to why he possesses the desire to become a super-hero. Additionally, we really could've extended our character representations of the Mother (Gwen) and Helena as the audience are not really given a lot of information as to why they're in the film and in general, there wasn't enough about them. We lacked in a few more areas like the intentions with the sound. I thought we provided quite a detailed summary of the diegetic and non-diegetic sounds we would utilise however there wasn't any examples as to what they may sound like so that's certainly a downside. Finally, we could've developed our production schedule as it is not clear what props or who exactly would be acting on those specific dates. Ultimately, I thought we created a well-presented presentation with thorough information. The feedback we received was relatively good as the common positive was that our idea was unique and intriguing and I'd say that eclipses every other downside to our presentation.