I thought that the feedback was completely fair; in some tasks I have excelled in terms of the length and detail I have gone into like tasks 9 and 10, however task 4 is evidence of my lack of detail and work which ultimately displays my overall work as inconsistent. I've noticed that and I am willing to improve on the targets set by Louisa such as completing tasks 18, 19 and 21. I understand that those particular tasks were lacking in detail so I shall be developing those over the next few days. Also, I could input images or links as a way of further evidence to support my explanations in the tasks. Ultimately, I'm looking to improve my consistency of detail across all tasks.
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